How to Build an MBA Goals Statement That Actually Holds Up

Most applicants think their goals are clear. That confidence is usually the first sign something isn’t working.

“Clear” is a judgment you make from inside your own reasoning. The people reading your application are evaluating it against a different standard entirely, and that committee isn’t just made up of administrators.

Career services is in the room. Their job is to assess whether the goals you’re claiming map to what employers in that space are actually hiring for — whether someone with your background would realistically be considered for that role, and whether the school can place you. That’s a market question, not a writing question. And most applicants have no idea it’s being asked.

Goals statements don’t fail because they’re poorly written. They fail because the reasoning underneath them doesn’t hold up against that kind of scrutiny and the candidates whose reasoning is weakest are often the least likely to see it. The more polished the articulation, the easier it is to mistake fluency for defensibility.

In this live YouTube session, Sia Admissions Founder Susan Berishaj will walk through how admissions committees actually evaluate goals statements — who is in the room, what each of them is assessing, and why the gap between a goals statement that reads as credible and one that reads as aspirational is almost never visible from the applicant’s seat.

• Why goals that seem specific and credible from the inside often register as generic or implausible to the people reviewing them and why that gap is hardest to see from where the applicant is sitting
• What career services is actually evaluating when it weighs in on a goals statement and why that standard has less to do with how the goals are written and more to do with how the market works
• Where goals statements most commonly lose the room — and why those breakdowns almost always happen in places the applicant didn’t know to look

We will have time for Q&A, and the replay will be available after the session airs.

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